I finished "The First Dunite Citizen" over the weekend and revised "Nineveh's Apex Predator." The former was submitted to a magazine and the latter was submitted to a writing competition. Now that those two are done, I can return to "Black Swan Origins: Nineveh."
My chief concern is that I'm giving Max too much screen time. In my recent fiction, she appears more than any other character. Granted, she is extremely fun to write about. However, she's not supposed to be the focal point of the series. I'm going to need to build up the other characters so that she does not hog the spotlight.