I'm over halfway done with Version 6.0 of "Black Swan Origins: Nineveh." It's about twice as good as Version 5.0 and I can't wait to see how it turns out. The Protector's best friend is growing in leaps and bounds, as well as another character who lacks integrity and courage. I also added some more information about what the male gangs are doing during the story. They can't interfere directly due to strict codes of conduct that the students of Nineveh have given themselves, but they still exert a lot of influence.
I'm very strong when it comes to English grammar and spelling. However, even if I decide to self-publish in an e-book format, I'm still going to have several editors look at it. Constructive feedback is invaluable because very often, when we spend so much time on our work, we miss some flaws due to the fact that we are so familiar with them that they don't stand out anymore. A fresh pair of eyes is always beneficial, and if I decide to go the self-publishing route, I will ask the authors whom I've met on Twitter about which editors they recommend.