Revision Goals Set!

Earlier today, I set my revision goals for BSO: Nineveh 6.0.  Other than "slash and burn", I need to increase the role of a member of the supporting cast.  She's the best friend of one of the "Big Four" characters, so she can't only have a few cute lines here and there, as she does now.  I've also changed the relationship between two of the characters.  Instead of being cousins, they will be half-siblings.  This revision should be faster than the last one.  My goal is to have it finished by the end of July.